Hurrying past the cafe
the sash of her dress
got caught in the lattice
of a chair and spun
her around to face me.
The moment briefly
gifted her a smile, and
as she gently began
to untangle herself,
I began unraveling.
-Bison Jack
caught
and in the cafe
her unraveling began
the moment she spun around to face me
I gently gifted her a smile and began hurrying past
the sash of her dress briefly…
as the lattice of a chair…
got to
untangle myself
AP says
They’re both nice. Thanks.