Just
off the street, between two
houses, inside that
narrow
space
all lit with fireflies,
no, lightning bugs, the air
dense,
you said to me: You.
You
between two
houses just off the street
that narrow space
all lit
the air inside dense with
no
you said to me: fireflies, lightning bugs.
AP says
Oh that’s lovely.
And your two cents turn it into a missed connection.
Not as lovely.
Both are true.