Gathering of birds
Making sure to shade my face
While guarding the river
Just yesterday I felt
Wind in the morning
We all know what will follow
I could rake your leaves
We all know I could
just rake your leaves
Making sure
to follow
~
Yesterday
while guarding the morning river
I felt the gathering of birds
shade my face
in wind
~
What will
AP says
What you did here.
It’s something like moving from
Go Tell a Watchman,
to killing a Mockingbird.
Very nice.